The Notan looks good. You design is strongest where the shapes touch the edge of the square, thus dissolving the edge (bottom, top and right side). Can you reshoot it flat, no distortion and make sure that you crop out your desk so that it is just the image? The left edge “J” could touch and you could cut a shape into the 3 hard corners which would really dissolve the hard edge square shape. Overall you did a good job!
The Notan looks good. You design is strongest where the shapes touch the edge of the square, thus dissolving the edge (bottom, top and right side). Can you reshoot it flat, no distortion and make sure that you crop out your desk so that it is just the image? The left edge “J” could touch and you could cut a shape into the 3 hard corners which would really dissolve the hard edge square shape. Overall you did a good job!