Good design revision. I am so glad that you opened up the heavy black shape in the center with a white snake. It opens up the entire design, although it would have been nice to see the inverse color shape flip and mirror the design on the white boarder paper. Doing preliminary pencil sketches will help with future Notan designs so you can see the distribution of White and Black shapes and how they invert.
Good design revision. I am so glad that you opened up the heavy black shape in the center with a white snake. It opens up the entire design, although it would have been nice to see the inverse color shape flip and mirror the design on the white boarder paper. Doing preliminary pencil sketches will help with future Notan designs so you can see the distribution of White and Black shapes and how they invert.